Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them to be able to be taught what to do otherwise.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
Topic: Will, Can we join to debate partnership alternatives?
Hello Will, Greetings!
I got here throughout your LinkedIn profile – favored how passionate you’ve been with work and it’s nice to see you main your organization to newer heights.
I’m from, XXXXX XXXXX a 350+ member, Licensed accomplice with a number of World IT distributors PEGA, Microsoft, Oracle, TOSCA, Google. We have now facilities of excellence in Cloud, Customized Software program Improvement, DevOps, PEGA, SaaS, AI, Information warehousing, Information Analytics, BI, and Testing. We’d be joyful to be a seamless extension of your crew.
Can I schedule a fast name as we speak or tomorrow to elucidate extra about it? Eagerly trying ahead to listening to from you.
Thanks & Greatest Regards,
REP’s Identify
Â
Will’s Take
Topic: Lavender Measurement: Are you outsourcing?
Hey Will,
I got here throughout Lavender from our work serving to groups in healthcare & insurance coverage with gross sales automation. Can’t lie… I used to be a bit stunned.
Given the standard of your extension, I believed your crew can be a lot bigger.
Is the crew outsourcing a few of that work as we speak? If not, we can assist offload some tasks that may bottleneck your progress.
Observe up with a considerate bump:
Hey Will,
Given your crew measurement, I’d be stunned to listen to you hadn’t thought-about outsourcing dev. Did you may have any suggestions on my word under?
Â
Have a query about your gross sales electronic mail? Begin a dialogue locally.
